ISO: An editor / collaborator

Working on a sci fi comic called Grey Wave about well, about stuff. It's a bit difficult to explain really. It's about family and alternate universe's and the responsibility of playing God and love and and and stuff. yeah.

Anyway - as I write and put images to the writing I'm finding it lacks that certain oomph. I'm looking for someone who can help read through and tame my poor habits/overuse/ etc. as well as suggest / add in sound effects where they should be. I don't know why I struggle with them so much.