looks pretty good so far. hopefully you just used art from Jorge. Some of the other artists just made Jon look bad. That one scene when he came out of the closet(literal), looked like a scene outta mad magazine.

But, Jorge is a total pro, he defined the look for the comics(the look we see in your sample here).

Side note: not sure if it was purposeful or not, but upon viewing this lora in my lora metadata viewer, I can see you added "jon kent jecket with s logo" as a tag, instead of 'jacket'. Potentially just a typo, but it could have affected training some if the training saw 'jecket' as a new word, instead of being representative of his 'jacket'.